Score: 8

"What a shame..."

submission: IM ATTACK!!

date: March 7, 2005

It occur to you to change to a private name if IMs really bug you that much? Nice game and all, but Christ, moan, moan.

Oh, and if you're going to link out through the windows, you could at least do it in a different window, or save the score if you want the game to end there.

Oh, and guy who asked about the code. It's the old NES code for Konami games. Gave you 30 lives in Contra.

Score: 9

"Looks like a lot of fun, but"

submission: Orc Siege

date: February 16, 2005

My GOD. Either my computer is worse than I thought (very possible), or this game hasn't really been optimized at all. The opening menu was like a series of postcards, and the battles were even worse. What type of computers did you make this for?

I can tell it's good though. Nice work. Next time, though, think of the poor bastards with shoddy computers. Thanks.

Score: 7

"Good work..."

submission: Bunker Defence (Demo)

date: June 7, 2004

It was fun game, but 1. I never got any powerups, and 2. It's the same pattern over and over again. Maybe more weapons, more types of deaths...

Score: 7

"Man, took you long enough"

submission: Idiot Ninjas 1

date: April 27, 2004

Can't wait for episode 4! If...um...it ever happens.

Score: 7

"Good first movie"

submission: deleteIBB02

date: November 15, 2003

Hey, a few notes:

Plurals (ninjas) and possessives (his) aren't followed with 's just because they end with "s". Look:
I am = I'm
You are =You're
He is =He's (she's, it's)
But not possessive (The dog and its bone)
We are = We're
You (pl) are = You're
They are = They're

Words can be followed with the apostrophe as long as the "to be" pronouns follow.

The ninja is running= The ninja's running

Good job on the movie, though :)

Score: 6

"Some advice on your story"

submission: Stealth: Intro

date: September 28, 2003

The idea of someone sending an army out to die because "people stand behind an army" is pretty dumb. If you think about it, people mistrust armies. They prefer to have a hero to watch on the news. Also, no experienced commander of an army would make the decision those two did. Bad army management. Up to you.

Score: 7

"Pretty much clueless through the whole movie"

submission: Sign Store

date: September 5, 2003

I know what you said about the sound, but I couldn't understand ANY of the lyrics, except for the occasional "sign". The only part I could hear was you talking at the end, and that was what was interesting. I dunno. Either make your movies shorter with better sound, or edit the movie so that you have enough room for better quality sound.

Score: 8

"Good ol' Kefka"

submission: 16-Bit Mercenaries

date: September 3, 2003

Not much of his original personality there, though. The real Kefka would have bitten out their eyes and poisoned the sockets. Anyway...

This movie is great during the action scenes; you make good use of the sprites, and the animation is fluid. I gotta say, though, the writing wasn't all that good. First off, the funny parts weren't very funny, and not very interesting. Secondly, you didn't say who sent them on the search of the mythical beast. Lastly, there was no real conflict. Everyone got along fine, except for Sabin and Gau, and Gau just took it. If I were you, I'd have a lot more arguing between Crono and Sabin. If I were Sabin, I'd wonder why Crono always got to call the shots...

Also, think about adding a few more quirks to each character's personality, especially Sabin and Crono. Some weird quirks. Just to establish some on-going jokes for your long-time viewers...
Well, damn good job for two megs. Keep it up!

Score: 8

"So..."

submission: Knoxs "Mortal Kombat"2

date: September 2, 2003

You're really good at dialogue AND voice acting. You could be making money on this stuff. Have you given any thought to animated series, or anything? Find an artist if none of you like to draw. Go to any bookstore, and look for the "Writer's Market", current edition, for a list of agents to send scripts to. I'd be happy if you were all rich :)

Score: 8

"Beautiful, good music..."

submission: Zlobin Toys

date: August 28, 2003

But it didn't make much sense as a story. Unless
"Zlobin" has a meaning we ignorant English-speakers are unaware of, the finishing line to this movie doesn't really catch the watcher like it should. The rest of the dialogue didn't really serve to illuminate what was happening on screen, either. Way above standard work, nonetheless.